Here are some examples that i think are the most strongest in the book.
I like the idea of using collage to make a Fair Isle look with the top, with the few portraits of various people i think are effective, but some of the dialogue just makes it weird.
This is the one conversation that i could tolerate for being actually real, some of them were literally stupid. Can't enthasize that even more.
What caught my eye on this is how Nick White has written like a child does, which i like as i have in previous work i have done written like this as i find it interesting and amusing.